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You said it best!

5 hours ago, Stan said:

Editorial is on page 46... always welcome feedback..

 

For all Eternity God waited in anticipation for  You  to show up to give You a Message - YOUR INCLUDED !!! { a merry dance }?️‍?

" If you tarry 'til you're better
You will never come at all "   .. "I Will Rise" by the late great saved  Glen Campbell

If your picture of God is starting to feel too good to be true, you're starting to move in the right direction. :candle:

 

"My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite."

Romeo and Juliet

 

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Nice magazine. Saved a couple of articles for posting on bulletin boards for student (and staff) attention.

James Brenneman

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I never realized before how far Mary and Joseph had to walk, between Nazareth and Bethlehem.

 

Thank you for that wonderful editorial.

 

Jeannie<br /><br /><br />...Change is inevitable; growth is optional....

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Canada does represent a goodly variety of wildlife to delight our imagination to how beautiful it can be living there away from the big cities. 

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"Keeping Christ in Christmas" listing of 6 points has a metrical pattern that would have made reading more pleasurable had you used double spacing between each item. Thereby the point made would have been more memorable. 

Otherwise, all is well that ends well. biggrin.png.642ad6143aaf7bda2e6ada43901a

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I never realized before how far Mary and Joseph had to walk, between Nazareth and Bethlehem.

According to the article, it was a 111 km walk/ride, about 68 miles, probably a 4-5 day journey. 

I agree with aka, need a little more white space between paragraphs in the editorial to make it more readable. Some readers tend to skip over large blocks of print because it takes more concentration to keep on the right line. Short paragraphs and space between paragraphs is a good rule for readability.

Excellent editorial, though. You should present it on the radio or TV or YouTube.

 

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