Need help reviewing concepts on unity with God

[ChristIsLife]

I am working on a book about unity with God, and before attempting to submit it for publication, it would be very helpful if others scrutinized the ideas. Any weaknesses in the logic are much easier to correct now than after it is in print.

 

My hope is to find a group here who is willing to review it. Every week or so I intend to share a new chapter (about 9-10 chapters in all), and then we can discuss it in this forum. Here is a basic overview:

 

Title:

One with God: The Staggering Message of the Kingdom

 

Premise: 

God has astounding plans for all of those who will become subjects of his kingdom. Unfortunately many have failed to truly understand his kingdom, and consequently they have missed the kingdom altogether, or are living short of their potential. The purpose of this book is to clearly describe the true kingdom, the astonishing rewards in store for those who enter it, and the deep impact citizenship will have on one’s relationships with God and with other believers.

 

Attached is the first chapter, entitled "True Food and Drink". If you want to participate in the review, please jump right in and start giving feedback. Negative feedback is just as valued as positive feedback, if not more, since the weak links of a chain are where the chain will fail. 

 

Thanks in advance for your comments!

01_True Food and Drink_2015-04-26.pdf